Thursday: Had an idea (she did it), wrote scene.
Saturday: Had an even better idea (no, he did it), rewrote scene.
Sunday: Had yet another idea (yes, he indeed did it, but better), rewrote rewritten scene.
Net gain: One scene.
Author Archives: Alison
Oh bliss
(… or, yearnings of an overaged intellectual snob)
The Lancet recently delivered a textual broadside on the exploitativeness and malignity of advertising directed at children, particularly the coupling of food (junk food) and entertainment. Cruising in the direction of my own night’s entertainment last week, I had the thought that if advertising directed at children was banned (as the Lancet advocated), might popular culture be reclaimed for grown-ups? Might we return to a point – visited the century before last – where ‘adult’ does not mean porn, but works of artistic and emotional maturity?
Communicating Risk
The British Medical Journal’s September 27th issue is dedicated to the theme of communicating risk, exploring the challenges of combining patient-empowerment with evidence-based medicine when the doctors themselves struggle to make sense of the numbers. As one of the writers asks, “Can you explain why a test with 95% sensitivity [ie ability to detect disease in someone who has the disease] might identify only 1% of affected people in the general population?” before offering a pictoral explanation of the measures used to interpret the meaning of a positive or negative test. In another interesting article, the relationship between risk and public perception of risk is explored, with a slant on it – the risk perception is not to oneself, but to children, and the examples used are those of vaccination, BSE (this is a UK publication, after all), and road accidents. Not surprisingly, controversy influences perception of risk. A doctor turned medical journalist describes his own struggles against the journalistic cultural urge not to let detail stand in the way of a good story. And the Internet receives the usual wistful mixed review.
A doctor from Orkney
Here is another bio I stumbled over while looking for something else – I can no longer remember what. Rena Marwick was a GP from Orkney, who was landed in Normandy in 1944 to work in military hospitals and then went on with the Allies when they liberated Belsen.
Orbital Burn
Another Calgary acquisition, one I had gone with the intention of acquiring, was fellow Edge author Adrian Bedford’s first novel, Orbital Burn. Immediate conflict of interest statement: I’m published by the same publisher, and Brian gave me a copy. So there’s bias. Having confessed that, I can now enthuse. There’s the odd rough spot, but I read it while heat-sick and hiding in a basement, feeling sorry for myself, and I still liked it a great deal.
It has a great first sentence, a classic SF first sentence: “One morning, not long before the end of the world, a dead woman named Lou sat drinking expresso in Sheb’s Old Earth Diner, one of the few places still open in the cheap part of Stalktown.” Lou is a freelance, unlicenced PI. As a privileged, feckless eighteen-year-old she fell victim to “accelerated tissue necrosis nanovirus”, released with murderous malice at a party. Now she exists with the help of nanotechnology that rebuilds her body as swiftly – more or less – as the nanovirus causes it to decay, but the nanotechnology wears out and needs topped up, so her existance is as precarious as her tenuous cash-stream. Lou’s decay – described effectively – is paralleled by the decay of Kestrel, her home colony, which is about to be destroyed out by an asteroid; the affluent are long gone, and the dispossessed huddle around the Stalk, the space elevator, in hopes of being lifted off in time. Lou is delaying her own departure, knowing that it is likely to mean loss of her livelihood and shortly thereafter, disintegration. When, into Sheb’s Old Earth Diner comes Dog, a cybernetically enhanced beagle, who hires her to look for his adopted charge, a retarded, sickly biological android boy for whom he has been caring. The boy has been kidnapped and Lou is the last PI in Stalktown.
If I go much further, I risk spoilers. Suffice to say, Lou comes up against the usual hazards of a down-and-out PI as she moves through the mean and crumbling streets and towers of Kestrel: lawless cops, the amoral elite, the thoroughly untrustworthy ex, and a client with his own secrets. Kestrel is grim, pitiful and memorable: the decaying neighbourhoods, the abandoned luxury residences. This being SF, there are a number of other forces that also cross Lou’s path, on her way to a resolution that would be an SF cliche were it not so right for Lou’s psychological journey. She was young and still maturing when she died; she has, in a way, been frozen in time. She has a resolution to reach, things to learn about love and acceptance, and the book has a tangible (at least to me) theme. The integration of character and setting, theme and resolution, and the sense of place are the book’s strengths, along with an unabashed echo of its influences, 40s and 50s hardboiled PI and classic SF novels.
Some faint damns among the praise. The viewpoint strayed during the first couple of chapters before settling into Lou’s head; perhaps in an attempt to solve the information transfer problem. There is some action that sets up one of the key scenes in the book that seems forced and need not; the elements are already there to support Lou’s reaction, but are not deployed effectively. But the scene it leads into – I don’t think I’d be giving much away when I say it is a courtroom scene – is one of my favorites. Along with the one in which Lou’s mysterious rescuer tries to elicit the former party-girl’s thoughts about her soul. In Bedford’s Universe, humanity, and law, has to accommodate biological androids, the walking dead, and sentient computers.